Writing What's Left Unspoken

Writing What's Left Unspoken

Monday, February 3, 2014

BEEing Me Graphic



 
Final 
First Draft

2 comments:

  1. YOU NEED TO CLEAN ALL IMAGES INCLUDING TEXT. YOU MIGHT WANT TO ADD MORE TO YOUR OWN IMAGE TO MAKE YOURSELF LOOK MORE LIKE A BEE BECAUSE IT JUST LOOKS LIKE YOU ARE STANDING ON THE BOTTOM. MS(3)

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  2. HELLO JOCELYN. I agree with Mr. Zavala you should fix up the letters that say "I am a bee." so that it can look much more neat. And also you should add more bees lol ok good job poet mastaaah jocelyn

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