I am a honey bee.
Gently minding my own business,
this honey bee gets busy.
this honey bee gets busy.
Collecting nectar, but a different kind.
Thirsting for knowledge, constantly feeding the mind.
I am a honey bee.
Caring for baby sister bees.
Because I’m the oldest honey bee.
My parents expect me to practice responsibility.
I am a honey bee.
Don’t mistake my brightness for weakness.
I’m about living life to its fullest,
indulging in its sweetness!
indulging in its sweetness!
Don’t fear the sting.
Friendship is what I bring.
Friendship is what I bring.
I hear my fellow honey bees.
More than just cleaning up a hive.
One team. One mission.
With many additions.
Exhausted but still determined.
I will continue to flutter on my journey for knowledge.
This is just the beginning.
There is no end.
Bzzz. Bzzz. Bzzz.
EXCELLENT DRAFT. MY ONLY SUGGESTION IS TRY TO MAKE ELABORATE A BIT MORE ON HOW BEES CAN BE MEAN AND STING PEOPLE AND HOW YOU MIGHT BE ABLE TO RELATE TO THAT BECAUSE WE DON'T JUST WANT THE GOOD SIDE OF A BEE. MS(3+)
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